comments

Hi Brooklyn I like your story and it was punctuated really well but the last sentence was a little creepy keep up the good work.

Josh

 

 

 

Hi Charlie I like your piece maybe next time edit your piece before you post it because there were some capital letters missing otherwise a really good piece.

Josh

 

 

Hi Dalia I like your piece maybe next time edit your piece before you post it because there were some capital letters missing otherwise a really good piece.

Josh

 

 

Hi Hamish I liked your work and it is a really good piece but maybe next time right in English and not in an Italian accent. It was very well written and edited piece good job keep up the good work.

Josh

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  1. Josh Great job on your comments to others, you have some positive feedback but also areas to improve on, well done 🙂

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